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You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to airline In your letter. Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight. Explain how the missing flight have impacted you. Clearly state what would you like the airline to do.

You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to airline In your letter. Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight. Explain how the missing flight have impacted you. Clearly state what would you like the airline to do. V1yK
Dear Sir, I am writing in concern concerning to missing an international connecting flight due to delay of flight of your airline. I am a business person and I do travel a lot, last week I was set to travel from Ahmedabad to London via Delhi. However the flight between Ahmedabad to Delhi was delayed by 3 hours due to a technical problem faced by the aircraft which led to miss my flight which was set to London from Delhi. As a result, I had missed my important meetings and had to reschedule them which had made my company a bit of loss. Moreover, now I need to wait for more 3 days before the next flight. Additionally, it will cost me an extra as I have no place to stay in Delhi for 3 days. In order to compensate, I would like the airline to bare my stay at Delhi and rebook my ticket to London as clearly due to technical problem of on your aircraft has made me missed my flights. Likewise, I hope you can understand my situation as I am not willing to spend more due to a problem in which your airline was responsible for. Looking forward for your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Pathik Patel
Dear Sir,

I am writing in concern concerning to missing an international connecting
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flight
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due
to delay of
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flight
of your airline. I am a business person and I do travel a lot, last week I
was set
to travel from Ahmedabad to London via Delhi.
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However
the
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flight
between Ahmedabad to Delhi
was delayed
by 3 hours
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due
to a technical problem faced by the aircraft which led to miss my
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flight
which
was set
to London from Delhi.

As a result
, I had missed my
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important
meetings and had to reschedule them which had made my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
a bit of loss.
Moreover
,
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now
I need to wait for more 3 days
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before
the
next
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flight
.
Additionally
, it will cost me an extra as I have no place to stay in Delhi for 3 days.

In order to compensate, I would like the airline to bare my stay at Delhi and rebook my ticket to London as
clearly
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due
to technical problem of on your aircraft has made me missed my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flights
.
Likewise
, I hope you can understand my situation as I am not willing to spend more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to a problem in which your airline was responsible for. Looking forward for your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Pathik
Patel
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IELTS letter You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to airline In your letter. Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight. Explain how the missing flight have impacted you. Clearly state what would you like the airline to do.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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