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A Friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university *give some advice about how to apply

Dear Susan, I ‘m very glad to agog this that you are interested in the same assignment which I had completed from the university last year. Although, I would like to explain the benefits of that course. The reason why, I choose that subject which hold me above and beyond of my dreams. The positive aspects of that task is easily to learn new language as well as readily to get chance to move to Europe side and being the part of one established country. Therefore, that was Spanish Language Course which was only took from one National University in Pakistan. When you achieve your chore it will save your breathe until and unless it’s not a piece of cake I admit but giving your ambitions extra mills it’s vital for your life. Actually, it’s simple to take admission in university. Just fill one form and paste three passport size photo with your documents. Wish you all the best for your future plan. Your friend, Saima

Dear Susan,

There probably shouldn’t be a space before the apostrophe.I‘m
I ‘m
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 glad to agog this that you are interested
 in the same assignment which I had completed from the university last year.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 the benefits of that course. The reason why, I choose that subject which hold me above and beyond of my dreams. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 aspects of that task is easily
 to learn new language as well
 as readily
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to Europe side and being the part of one established country.

Therefore
, that was Spanish Language Course which was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 took from one National University in Pakistan. When you achieve your chore it will save your Did you mean “breath”? ‘Breathe’ is a verb.breath
breathe
 until and unless it’s not a piece of cake I admit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 giving your ambitions extra mills it’s vital for your life.

Actually, it’s simple to take admission in university. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 fill one form and paste three passport size The usual collocation for “photo” is “of”, not “with”. Did you mean “photo of your documents”?photo of your documents
photo with your documents
.

Wish you all the best for your future plan.

Your friend,

Possible spelling mistake found.SAIME
Saima