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Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work .In your letter *explain why you want to do voluntary /unpaid work at the museum. *describe some skills and qualities that would be useful. *give details of when you would be available for work.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my attentiveness about working part-time voluntary in the museum due to develop my experiences related to my field. Although, I am an art student and I am writing a thesis on tradition and different culture. However, these exhibition enhance our interest and motivate me to understand the civilization of our common tradition. Where, as the artist primarily concerned used to venue the cultural exchange activities and can display their individual thoughts as well as convey some message to us. Moreover, according to my mind, these gallery over moon my behavior and work these type of salon provided me number of information related to my studies. Even, being the part of this foundation it’s easy for me to share my art activities or thoughts with others. Therefore, being a freshman I will be free from my university in the evening time as well as on weekend. I would appreciate it if you could consider my humble request. Kindly Regards, Yours’s Sincerely,
Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my attentiveness about working part-time voluntary in the museum due to develop my experiences related to my field.

Although, I am an art
student and
I am writing a thesis on tradition and
different
culture.
However
,
these exhibition
enhance our interest and motivate me to understand the civilization of our common tradition. Where, as the artist
primarily
concerned
used
to venue the cultural exchange activities and can display their individual thoughts
as well
as convey
some
message to us.

Moreover
, according to my mind, these gallery over moon my behavior and work these type of salon provided me number of information related to my studies. Even, being the part of this foundation it’s easy for me to share my art activities or thoughts with others.

Therefore
, being a freshman I will be free from my university in the evening time
as well
as on weekend.

I would appreciate it if you could consider my humble request.

Kindly Regards,

Yours’
s
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter *explain why you want to do voluntary /unpaid work at the museum. *describe some skills and qualities that would be useful. *give details of when you would be available for work.

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