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Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work .In your letter explain why you want to do voluntary /unpaid work at the museum. describe some skills and qualities that would be useful. *give details of when you would be available for work.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my attentiveness about working part-time voluntary in the museum due to develop my experiences related to my field. Although, I am an art student and I am writing a thesis on tradition and different culture. However, these exhibition enhance our interest and motivate me to understand the civilization of our common tradition. Where, as the artist primarily concerned used to venue the cultural exchange activities and can display their individual thoughts as well as convey some message to us. Moreover, according to my mind, these gallery over moon my behavior and work these type of salon provided me number of information related to my studies. Even, being the part of this foundation it’s easy for me to share my art activities or thoughts with others. Therefore, being a freshman I will be free from my university in the evening time as well as on weekend. I would appreciate it if you could consider my humble request. Kindly Regards, Yours’s Sincerely,

Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my attentiveness about working part-time voluntary in the museum due to develop my experiences related to my field.

Although, I am an art Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).student, and
student and
 I am writing a thesis on tradition and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 culture. However
, ‘These’ does not seem to match the singular noun ‘exhibition’. Did you mean “this exhibition” or “these exhibitions”?this exhibitionthese exhibitions
these exhibition
 enhance our interest and motivate me to understand the civilization of our common tradition. Where, as the artist primarily
 concerned This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to venue the cultural exchange activities and can display their individual thoughts as well
 as convey This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 message to us.

Moreover
, according to my mind, these gallery over moon my behavior and work these type of salon provided me number of information related to my studies. Even, being the part of this foundation it’s easy for me to share my art activities or thoughts with others.

Therefore
, being a freshman I will be free from my university in the evening time as well
 as on weekend.

I would appreciate it if you could consider my humble request.

Kindly Regards,

An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: “Yours”?Yours
Yours’
s Sincerely
, 

IELTS letter Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter explain why you want to do voluntary /unpaid work at the museum. describe some skills and qualities that would be useful. *give details of when you would be available for work.

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

167 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work .In your letter *explain why you want to do voluntary /unpaid work at the museum. *describe some skills and qualities that would be useful. *give details of when you would be available for work.

IELTS letter Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter *explain why you want to do voluntary /unpaid work at the museum. *describe some skills and qualities that would be useful. *give details of when you would be available for work.

Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work .In your letter explain why you want to do voluntary /unpaid work at the museum. describe some skills and qualities that would be useful. *give details of when you would be available for work.

IELTS letter Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary / unpaid work. In your letter explain why you want to do voluntary /unpaid work at the museum. describe some skills and qualities that would be useful. *give details of when you would be available for work.