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Write a letter to a friend asking for his/her help to make a website. In your letter, you should: -describe what kind of website you want -say when you want the website to be done -explain how important the website is to you.

Hello Daniel, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to request your help in designing a tourism website for my company where tourists can find useful information about the tourist attractions in my city, and available food and accommodation options. I am hoping that the website will be ready by July which is the peak season for tourism. I know that you will be on summer holiday at that time / in that month and your timetable will be relatively light. so, I guess you will be able to help me. Also, as per the revised government regulations, only those under the age of 24 years are eligible for financial support to start a business. This website will be the proof of my business, and after August, I will be 25 years old, so I hope that this website can be completed before that month. Let me know if you are available. Hope to hear from you soon. Warm regards

Hello Daniel,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to request your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in designing a tourism You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsite
website
 for my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 where tourists can find useful information about the tourist attractions in my city, and available food and accommodation options. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 am hoping that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsite
website
 will be ready by July which is the peak season for tourism.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 know that you will be on summer holiday at that time / in that month and your timetable will be relatively
 light. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.So
so
, I guess you will be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me. Also
, as per the revised This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 regulations, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 those under the age of 24 years are eligible for financial support to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 a business. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsite
website
 will be the proof of my business, and after August, I will be 25 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I hope that this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsite
website
 can be completed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 that month. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know if you are available.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Warm regards