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Write a letter to a friend asking for his/her help to make a website. In your letter, you should: -describe what kind of website you want -say when you want the website to be done -explain how important the website is to you.

Hello Daniel, I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to request your help in designing a tourism website for my company where tourists can find useful information about the tourist attractions in my city, and available food and accommodation options. I am hoping that the website will be ready by July which is the peak season for tourism. I know that you will be on summer holiday at that time / in that month and your timetable will be relatively light. so, I guess you will be able to help me. Also, as per the revised government regulations, only those under the age of 24 years are eligible for financial support to start a business. This website will be the proof of my business, and after August, I will be 25 years old, so I hope that this website can be completed before that month. Let me know if you are available. Hope to hear from you soon. Warm regards
Hello Daniel,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to request your
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help
in designing a tourism
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
website
for my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
where tourists can find useful information about the tourist attractions in my city, and available food and accommodation options.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am hoping that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
website
will be ready by July which is the peak season for tourism.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
know that you will be on summer holiday at that time / in that month and your timetable will be
relatively
light.
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so
, I guess you will be able to
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help
me.
Also
, as per the revised
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
regulations,
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only
those under the age of 24 years are eligible for financial support to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
a business. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
website
will be the proof of my business, and after August, I will be 25 years
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old
,
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so
I hope that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
website
can
be completed
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before
that month.
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Let
me know if you are available.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Warm regards

IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend asking for his/her help to make a website. In your letter, you should: -describe what kind of website you want -say when you want the website to be done -explain how important the website is to you.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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