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Your local council is considering sports and leasuire center that it runs , in order to save money . Write a letter to it and ask not to close it .

Your local council is considering sports and leasuire center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to it and ask not to close it. YBaQn
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to let you know some detail activities that a group of us enjoy doing in this community center. Doing karate is one of the major physical sporst that the majarity of juveniles are into it. Furthermore, this place provides the chance of making some friends and also casual accuaintance for elderly people which help them to boost their energy through social communities.
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IELTS letter Your local council is considering sports and leasuire center that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to it and ask not to close it.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
69 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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