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A English friend, Alex, has recently invited you to stay and has just sent you a letter

A English friend, Alex, has recently invited you to stay and has just sent you a letter k6aln

Dear Alex, I’m glad to receive your invitation and I obviously accept it. You’re so kind that ask me everything in order to make me feel comfortable when staying with you. Firstly, don’t laugh at me if I tell you I can eat most things but especially pasta. It’s my go – to. On the contrary, to be honest with you, I can’t stand mushrooms and cabbage. These make my stomach bloat. Besides, if I eat nuts, I’ll come out in a rash. It’s so serious. Equally, I’m allergic to milk, but just a bit. The second thing is my eating habits. People in my country have dinner quite late, because they get off work at 6 p. m, plus traffic jam that make them go home late. And I always down a coffee for breakfast to feel fully awake, followed by a sandwich with ham and cheese. It’s so tasty and full. Honestly, I don’t often eat out, except for special events. However, sometimes, I feel bored with home – cooked food, I’ll go to the restaurants. The kinds of food I want to try is Indian food and something is spicy. Can you recommend to me? That’s all. I completely confident to say that I’m not a picky eater. I hope we have common in food taste. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your friend.

Dear Alex,

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