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Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of the Alperton, London area, writing to request you to reconsider your decision to close the sport and leisure center we have in our community. I am hoping that you would weigh the utility of this center previously shutting it down. As you know, we have more than 8 thousand members in our community and only two such leisure and sporting centers. When we are expecting another recreational center for the benefits of the community members, the decision to shut down the 'Inner circle Sports & Leisure Center' was a number of shocking news for us. I and my father go to this place to do our daily exercise. Besides, I have noticed a plethora of children play there in the evening and local individuals spend a significant amount of time there. numerous teenagers have chosen this place to play a number of indoor games and spend quality times. If this place is closed, people would feel dejected and I personally worry that the teenagers who use this center would get involved in subversive activities. This is not at all admissible. If cutting the cost is the only reason to close this center, I am sure there are alternatives. I have talked to several other members and all of them are against closing this place. Please do reconsider your decision for the betterment of our community. Yours faithfully, Patrick Stuart
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident of the
Alperton
, London area, writing to request you to reconsider your decision to close the sport and leisure center we have in our community. I am hoping that you would weigh the utility of this center previously shutting it down.

As you know, we have more than 8 thousand members in our community and
only
two such leisure and sporting
centers
. When we are expecting another recreational center for the benefits of the community members, the decision to shut down the 'Inner circle Sports & Leisure Center' was a number of shocking news for us. I and my father go to this place to do our daily exercise.
Besides
, I have noticed a plethora of children play there in the evening and local individuals spend a significant amount of time there.
numerous
teenagers
have chosen this place to play a number of indoor games and spend quality times.

If this place
is closed
,
people
would feel
dejected and
I
personally
worry that the
teenagers
who
use
this center would
get
involved in subversive activities. This is not at all admissible. If cutting the cost is the
only
reason to close this center, I am sure there are alternatives. I have talked to several other members and all of them are against closing this place.

Please
do reconsider your decision for the betterment of our community.

Yours
faithfully
,

Patrick Stuart
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IELTS letter Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
237 words
6.0
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