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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my interest to an advertisement published on 02-02-2021 in an Australian magazine, where you asked for a short term childcare for your kid. I am extremely confident that I would be able to take care of child and give careful care since I have had a wonderful experience in raising younger siblings on my own as eldest person of my family. Besides, I found children as a full of joy that is why I took care of many young kids as a babysitter in my hometown. In fact, I have completed certificate course about how to do parenting. I will definitely come to Australia by next month to see my uncle and plan to stay there for a while with my uncle's family. While staying there, i have a plan visit all beautiful places and learn people's culture and history. Hope I will get a response from you and would get this job. I look forward from hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Beulah.
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest to an advertisement published on 02-02-2021 in an Australian magazine, where you
asked for
a short term childcare for your kid.

I am
extremely
confident that I would be able to take care of child and give careful care since I have had a wonderful experience in raising younger siblings on my
own
as
eldest
person of my family.
Besides
, I found children as a full of joy
that is
why I took care of
many
young kids as a babysitter in my hometown. In fact, I have completed certificate course about how to do parenting.

I will definitely
come
to Australia by
next
month to
see
my uncle and plan to stay there for a while with my uncle's family. While staying there,
i
have a plan visit all
beautiful
places and learn
people
's culture and history.

Hope I will
get
a response from you and would
get
this job.

I look forward from hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Beulah.
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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