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Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes g2al
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my view about the upcoming plans to cease the operations of the entertainment and sports facilities currently being runned by your esteemed office. Me and my family are frequent visitors of the said centre, where we spend most of our weekends. My kids enjoy the bowling room very much, whereas me and my wife enjoy sitting in the nearby cafe and look after them. This is also amazing place for spending time with the friends, with whom we usually meet in the pub on the third floor and compete in a pub quiz on Fridays. I also take the responsibility to insist that this centre plays a significant role in the life of the whole town. This can be easily demonstrated by the numbers of people, young and elderly, visiting the swimming pool as well as tennis courts located on the other side of the building. If the decision is taken to ultimately close down this centre, the habitants will have to travel long distance and spend extra efforts and time to access the similar centre in the neighbouring town. And yet I believe there will be those who will be unable to do this due to their work schedule and other commitments. My view is that this will eventually result in reduced happiness levels and increasing complaints. I truly hope that the decision will be reconsidered and the subject centre will remain as the favourite place of citizens. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my view about the upcoming plans to cease the operations of the entertainment and sports facilities
currently
being
runned
by your esteemed office.

Me
and my family are frequent visitors of the said
centre
, where we spend most of our weekends. My kids enjoy the bowling room
very
much, whereas me and my wife enjoy sitting in the nearby
cafe
and look after them. This is
also
amazing place for spending time with the friends, with whom we
usually
meet
in the pub on the third floor and compete in a pub quiz on Fridays.

I
also
take the responsibility to insist that this
centre
plays a significant role in the life of the whole town. This can be
easily
demonstrated by the numbers of
people
, young and elderly, visiting the swimming pool
as well
as tennis courts located on the other side of the building.

If the decision
is taken
to
ultimately
close down this
centre
, the habitants will
have to
travel long distance and spend extra efforts and time to access the similar
centre
in the
neighbouring
town. And
yet
I believe there will be those who will be unable to do this due to their work schedule and other commitments. My view is that this will
eventually
result in
reduced
happiness levels and increasing complaints.

I
truly
hope that the decision will
be reconsidered
and the subject
centre
will remain as the
favourite
place of citizens.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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