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Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear sir/mam,  I am writing this letter to bring your attention to my concern of Leo tennis and sports center getting shut by the council on the short notice. The centerwas attraction for public as people used to walk, jog and a number of performed yoga. Children also enjoyed their games especially various rides. My family and friends were frequent visitors of the center, devoting significant amount of our vacations by relaxing. My grandmother loved the park for its greenery and was evident about her morning or evening walks. I played tennis with my friends, we even won a trophy in a championship held last year by the council. We have spent half of our lives enjoying doing leisure activities. We have a lot of memories attached to the park. The centerhas a history of three decades this it has emotional connection with the public. Closing it will impact the livelihood of this locality, particularly health as people will start living sedentary lifestyles in light of the fact that of lack of parks for physical activity. It will also influence the playing time of younger population as they will be devoid of all the recreational activities which they used enjoy in the center. Owing to this they will be forced into mobile games which will impact their growth. I would be undoubtedly been grateful to the council if my concerns get resolved. In order to raise council’s fund through charities. Thanks and regards.
Dear sir/mam,
 
I am writing this letter to bring your attention to my concern of Leo tennis and sports center getting shut by the council on the short notice.

The
centerwas
attraction for public as
people
used
to walk, jog and a number of performed yoga. Children
also
enjoyed their games
especially
various rides. My family and friends were frequent visitors of the center, devoting significant amount of our vacations by relaxing. My grandmother
loved
the park for its greenery and was evident about her morning or evening walks. I played tennis with my friends, we even won a trophy in a championship held last year by the council. We have spent half of our
lives
enjoying doing leisure activities. We have
a lot of
memories attached to the park.

The
centerhas
a history of three decades this it has emotional connection with the public. Closing it will impact the livelihood of this locality,
particularly
health as
people
will
start
living sedentary lifestyles in light of the fact that of lack of parks for physical activity. It will
also
influence the playing time of younger population as they will be devoid of all the recreational activities which they
used
enjoy in the center. Owing to this they will
be forced
into mobile games which will impact their growth.

I would be
undoubtedly
been grateful to the council if my concerns
get
resolved. In order to raise council’s fund through charities.

Thanks and regards.
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IELTS letter Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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  American English
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6.0
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