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You arranged to visit a friend in england but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event, apologize for the situation and suggest a new arrangement.

Dear XYZ, I hope you are doing well! I'm eagerly waiting to meet you in couple of days and spend some time awesome time in england. But there's an issue, actually my elder brother's engagement is planned which is in the period when i was going to visit england. So I have to plan my trip to england accordingly. I know you are so excited to meet me as its been years we haven't met. As you know I'm the only one, so I have to look after all arrangements regarding function because of which I would not be visiting England this month end. So, I would like to apologize for not able to visit this time. I have given my application for visa and procedure has started. And as soon as the visa procedure gets completes I will visit England. I have talked to the visa department regarding what time it will take to complete the process, which is approximately one month. So, mostly next month end I would visit england. So get ready, I'm coming soon to have lots of fun as planned. yours sincerely, PQR
Dear XYZ,

I hope you are doing well!

I'm
eagerly
waiting to
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meet
you in
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couple of
days and spend
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some
time awesome time in
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england
.
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But
there's an issue, actually my elder brother's engagement
is planned
which is in the period when
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i
was going to
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visit
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england
.
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So
I
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have to
plan my trip to
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england
accordingly
.

I know you are
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so
excited to
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meet
me as
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its
been years we haven't met. As you know I'm the
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only
one,
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so
I
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have to
look
after all
arrangements regarding function
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because
of which I would not be visiting England this month
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end
.
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So
, I would like to apologize for not able to
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visit
this time.

I have
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given
my application for visa and procedure has
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started
. And as
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soon
as the visa procedure
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gets
completes I will
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visit
England. I have talked to the visa department regarding what time it will take to complete the process, which is approximately one month.
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So
,
mostly
next
month
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end
I would
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visit
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england
.

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So
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get
ready, I'm coming
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soon
to have lots of fun as planned.

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yours
sincerely
,

PQR

IELTS letter You arranged to visit a friend in england but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event, apologize for the situation and suggest a new arrangement.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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