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You arranged to visit a friend in england but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event, apologize for the situation and suggest a new arrangement.

Dear XYZ, I hope you are doing well! I'm eagerly waiting to meet you in couple of days and spend some time awesome time in england. But there's an issue, actually my elder brother's engagement is planned which is in the period when i was going to visit england. So I have to plan my trip to england accordingly. I know you are so excited to meet me as its been years we haven't met. As you know I'm the only one, so I have to look after all arrangements regarding function because of which I would not be visiting England this month end. So, I would like to apologize for not able to visit this time. I have given my application for visa and procedure has started. And as soon as the visa procedure gets completes I will visit England. I have talked to the visa department regarding what time it will take to complete the process, which is approximately one month. So, mostly next month end I would visit england. So get ready, I'm coming soon to have lots of fun as planned. yours sincerely, PQR

Dear XYZ,

I hope you are doing well!

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 waiting to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
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couple of
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some
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england
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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visit
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england
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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have to
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england
accordingly
.

I know you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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meet
 me as Did you mean “it’s” (=“it has”) instead of ‘its’ (possessive pronoun)?it'sit has
its
 been years we haven't met. As you know I'm the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 look after all
 arrangements regarding function This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of which I would not be visiting England this month This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I would like to apologize for not able to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visit
 this time.

I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 my application for visa and procedure has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
. And as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as the visa procedure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 completes I will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visit
 England. I have talked to the visa department regarding what time it will take to complete the process, which is approximately one month. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, mostly
next
 month This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 I would You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappointmentstopvacationstopoverstaycall
visit
Possible spelling mistake found.EnglandinlandglandganglandelandLangland
england
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 ready, I'm coming This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 to have lots of fun as planned.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Yours
yours
sincerely
,

PQR