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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Deep, I am very glad to hear that you want to go for camping as I know you have not been to camp before. I think you would be very excited about all those outings, living in tents etc. There are lot of activities which you can do at camping spot such as playing cards, singing songs and having some adventures activities. It would be so enthusiastic to see sunrise there. At night, you might feel scary in the tents but overall, you will be enjoying a lot. As you will be living in the tents make sure you use bug spray because there could be bugs on the grass. Your might feel shortage of food so do not eat too much. Most important thing is weather which no one can believe there. It changes a lot at such places. There would be no mode of electricity, so do not forget your power bank to keep phone charged. In case of me, I love camping and I have never missed any opportunity of going on camping. It would be so pleasant for me If I could go with you but due to my JET entrance test, I am unable to join you. Hope you like my ideas and take care of yourself. All the best, Jasdeep

Dear Deep,

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some
 adventures activities. It would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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see
 sunrise there. At night, you might feel scary in the tents This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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, you will be enjoying a lot.

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 do not eat too much. Most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
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 thing is weather which no one can believe there. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
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 a lot at such places. There would be no mode of electricity, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 do not forget your power bank to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 phone charged.

In case of me, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 camping and I have never missed any opportunity of going on camping. It would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 pleasant for me If I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
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but
 due to my JET entrance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
, I am unable to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you.

Hope you like my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 and take care of yourself.

All the best,

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