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Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Ruchi Mam, I am Shubham Sharma, one of your student from the evening batch of Motion Graphics & Animation from your institute. I am writing this letter to inform you that as you already know that I have been full-time working as a designer at ISB. Actually, now my office team is planning the biggest reunion event which goes over 3-4 days. Due to this, we have to plan the whole event in terms of marketing and managing it. So the dates are announced yesterday by my seniors and that is 20 February 2021 to 23 February 2021. So they require full support from my side to make this event remarkable and this year I will be leading the whole event so with all regards I just wanted to make a small request to you as I have already paid the whole amount of the course. I would be glad if I can continue the course from next month onwards as I will be busy this complete month organizing the event. Hope you can understand my issues I am going through. Yours Sincerely, Shubham Shubham
Dear
Ruchi
Mam,

I am Shubham Sharma, one of your student from the evening batch of Motion Graphics & Animation from your institute. I am writing this letter to inform you that as you already know that I have been full-time working as a designer at ISB. Actually,
now
my office team is planning the biggest reunion
event
which goes over 3-4 days. Due to this, we
have to
plan the whole
event
in terms of marketing and managing it.
So
the dates
are announced
yesterday by my seniors and
that is
20 February 2021 to 23 February 2021.

So
they require full support from my side to
make
this
event
remarkable and this year I will be leading the whole
event
so
with all regards I
just
wanted to
make
a
small
request to you as I have already paid the whole amount of the course. I would be glad if I can continue the course from
next
month onwards as I will be busy this complete month organizing the
event
. Hope you can understand my issues I am going through.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Shubham Shubham
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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