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Dear Emma Murphy, I am writing this letter after reading about the advertisement in local newspaper. I want to apply for the vacant position of shop assistant in the music department. My name is Jacopo, I am 34 and currently living in Rome. I have a Bachelor's degree in Physical Education and I speak English fluently with a B2 certification. Ever since I was child I have been passionated about music in fact I am a self-taught guitarist. I spend my spare time on listening to all genre of music and practicing with several instruments such as bass and drums. Although I have never worked as shop assistant, I have a relevant experience on talking to large group of people because of my recent job as swimming teacher. If I were given this opportunity my expertise in music would improve the quality of your stores and also I have the possibility of developing my talking skills. I am available to work from July onwards. Lastly, might I ask what the salary would be? Also, I could you provide me with details regarding the working hours? Please, see my CV enclosed. Thank you for your time and I eagerly await for a response. Your Sincerely Jacopo

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