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You are planning to visit your friend Mike in England. Mike has written to you.

You are planning to visit your friend Mike in England. Mike has written to you. lL5RX
Dear Mike, I hope you have been keeping well. It’s been a long time since we last met and that’s the reason why I was so eagerly waiting to see you. I was very happy to have been invited to your summer trip to the countryside. Because It would be my first time spending my holiday in England. I have been to England twice but just due to my work. I have never got a chance to visit any interesting and peaceful places there before. I would rather make a homestay than sleep in a tent as I would like a convenient and comfortable place to rest and relax. It would also be easier for me to show off my cooking and introduce you and your friend to my country’s traditional cuisine such as “pho”. “Pho” is one of the most favorite and famous food in my country as well as overseas countries. My mom taught me how to cook delicious and traditional pho and I would like you and your friend could enjoy its good taste. In the summer holiday, I would get much time so I could come to see you a few days before the trip. I really love to have time to be with you. If it would be possible, I would prefer to have a London tour with you. I hope you could guide me to some wonderful places and recommend to me some famous cuisine in your city. And I could buy some souvenirs for my family there too. How do you think about my idea? Let me know your decision I am looking forward to seeing you soon! Love, Rachel
Dear Mike,

I hope you have been keeping well. It’s been a long
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time
since we last met and that’s the reason why I was
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so
eagerly
waiting to
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see
you. I was
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very
happy to have
been invited
to your summer trip to the countryside.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
It would be my
first
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time
spending my holiday in England. I have been to England twice
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but
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just
due to my work. I have never
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got
a chance to visit any interesting and peaceful places there
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before
.
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I
would
rather
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make
a homestay than sleep in a tent as I would like a convenient and comfortable place to rest and relax. It would
also
be easier for me to
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show
off my cooking and introduce you and your friend to my country’s traditional cuisine such as “
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pho
”. “
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Pho
” is one of the most favorite and
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famous
food in my country
as well
as overseas countries. My mom taught me how to cook delicious and traditional
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pho
and I would like you and your friend could enjoy its
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good
taste. In the summer holiday, I would
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get
much
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time
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so
I could
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come
to
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see
you a few days
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before
the trip. I
really
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love
to have
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time
to be with you. If it
Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)
would be
possible, I would prefer to have a London tour with you. I hope you could guide me to
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some
wonderful places and recommend to me
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some
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famous
cuisine in your city. And I could
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buy
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some
souvenirs for my family there too. How do you
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think
about my
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idea
?
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Let
me know your decision

I am looking forward to seeing you
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soon
!

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Love
,

Rachel

IELTS letter You are planning to visit your friend Mike in England. Mike has written to you.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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