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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Madam I am writing to inform you that I am a student in one of your evening courses on Microsoft Office (MS20). With due respect, I would like to discontinue my classes for this semester. Along with the evening course, I was also working as a full-time employee at Bajaj Capital, making it difficult for me to manage both simultaneously. For the upcoming months, I have been assigned numerous targets to achieve in a short time span. Because of this, I need to work for more hours than usual. I may also have to overtime at work. Also, by the end of September, I may fly to Australia on an office project. In this situation, neither I will be able to attend the classes or study for assignments. Considering my current situation I would like to request you to kindly cancel my this semester registration, and enroll me for the next one. I do not want to leave this course as it will be very beneficial for me in my future. I look forward to your consideration. Yours faithfully, Sneha Chawla
Dear Madam

I am writing to inform you that I am a student in one of your evening courses on Microsoft Office (MS20). With due respect, I would like to discontinue my classes for this semester. Along with the evening course, I was
also
working as a full-time employee at Bajaj Capital, making it difficult for me to manage both
simultaneously
.

For the upcoming months, I have
been assigned
numerous targets to achieve in a short time span.
Because of this
, I need to work for more hours than usual. I may
also
have to
overtime at work.
Also
, by the
end
of September, I may
fly
to Australia on an office project. In this situation, neither I will be able to attend the classes or study for assignments.

Considering my
current
situation I would like to request you to kindly cancel my this semester registration, and enroll me for the
next
one. I do not want to
leave
this course as it will be
very
beneficial for me in my future.

I look forward to your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sneha
Chawla
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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