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You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Explain the situation • Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Santhosh, and I live at 120, Coleridge Road, Cambridge. Recently, I have placed an order for a new Sony camera through online on the holiday sale as it was delivered on the next day by your company representative. As, I have been purchasing your company products for many years. I have not found any faults till now. Two days before, I purchased a new advanced Sony camera for excursion purposes. After, it got delivered to my home. I opened the box and found that the lens was already broken. Suddenly I called your customer care number that they ask a one week time to be repaired or replacement for a new product. I have been waiting for more than a week, till now I did not receive any call or update from your company. I have booked my train tickets for an excursion. You know, the camera is how much important for my excursion? . Already, I have informed all of my friends that I brought a camera for an excursion for taking photos. I request you to delve into this matter resolve it as much as quick you can. I hope that you will take action promptly. I look forward to hearing from you immediately! Yours Truly, Santhosh

Dear Sir/ Madam,

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camera
 through online on the holiday sale as it was delivered
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 day by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 representative.

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camera
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now
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company
. I have booked my train tickets for an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekpicnicexpeditionoutingjunkettour
excursion
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.
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excursion
 for taking photos. I request you to delve into this matter resolve it as much as quick you can.

I hope that you will take action promptly
.

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I
 look forward to hearing from you immediately!

Yours Truly
,

Santhosh