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your local council is closing the children's play ground in your locality as not many children visit the park.write a letter to the council requesting not to close it.

your local council is closing the children's play ground in your locality as not many children visit the park. write a letter to the council requesting not to close it. 53eVn
Dear Sir/Madam, My self Albert Jo, the resident under your local authority border. I am writing in regard to request you in the matter of non-closure of the Children’s Park located in the center of our suburb. This play ground is the only sole play area which could easily accessible by everyone in this locality it has been a vital role in our lives. In addition, the play area cover a large are it likely to comfortable for a number of offspring’s to have fun with their peers and it is not only beneficial for children but also for old people to having fresh air and chatting with others as well. It is been the awful condition due to lack of facilities and unhygienic surrounding – unwanted waste dumping- of the park made-up the decision of no longer use it by some residents. It would be greatly appreciable if you rethink about the closure formalities and take initiative to re-build the park with a new image, considering its vital role in resident’s lives. I look forward to hearing from you. Your’s faithfully, Albert Jo
Dear Sir/Madam,

My self Albert Jo, the resident under your local authority border. I am writing in regard to request you in the matter of non-closure of the Children’s Park located in the center of our suburb.

This play ground is the
only
sole play area which could
easily
accessible by everyone in this locality it has been a vital role in our
lives
.
In addition
, the play area cover a large are it likely to comfortable for a number of offspring’s to have fun with their peers and it is not
only
beneficial for children
but
also
for
old
people
to having fresh air and chatting with others
as well
.

It
is been
the awful condition due to lack of facilities and unhygienic surrounding
unwanted waste dumping- of the park made-up the decision of no longer
use
it by
some
residents.

It would be
greatly
appreciable if you rethink about the closure formalities and take initiative to re-build the park with a new image, considering its vital role in resident’s
lives
.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your’s
faithfully
,

Albert Jo
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IELTS letter your local council is closing the children's play ground in your locality as not many children visit the park. write a letter to the council requesting not to close it.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
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