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Write a cover latter for Global Stage

Write a cover latter for Global Stage Rk758

Dear Emma Richard, I would like to apply for the job advertised on the Newspaper, where it said that staff are needed to work at Global Stage UK a world music festival which will take place on July. I’m 22 years old. I have graduated from the University of California, where I completed a degree in Business Administration. Additionally, I have a high level of English (TOFEL certificate ), since in spite of the fact that I am from Yamen. I have lived in USA for six years to study at the university. I have some relevant experience, so I have belonged to the university music band. I am a currently assistant manager in a company organizing events and in another rules related to music. So l am used to dealing with people and my tasks have included organizing and running meetings. Furthermore, I do regular exercises like running and swimming. Therefore I am a healthy person. Additionally, I have one year of the first aid experience. I have worked during the wore in Yemen as a palmer. As you will see in my CV. I am easygoing and reliable person. In addition, I am very enthusiastic about music festivals and I would welcome the chance to be part of such a high-profile Global Stage. I think that I will be the ideal candidate for that job but I will also add it as a part of my work experience. I attach a full CV and if you require any further information, I would be very happy to provide it. I look forward to seeing you. Yours faithfully, Eman AL-Molayki

Dear Emma Richard,

I would like to apply for the job advertised on the Newspaper, where it said that staff are needed
 to work at Global Stage UK a world You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsoulraprockmelodypiecesinging
music
 festival which will take place on July.

I’m 22 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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TOFEL
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in spite of
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Yamen
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lived
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in USA
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some
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so
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music
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I
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company
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events
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rules
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music
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So
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used
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Therefore
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, I have one year of the first
 aid experience. I have worked during the wore in Yemen as a Possible spelling mistake found.Palmerpalercalmerpalmedpalmierpalm er
palmer
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As
 you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 in my CV.

I am easygoing and reliable person. In addition
, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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music
 festivals and I would welcome the chance to be part of such a high-profile Global Stage. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that I will be the ideal candidate for that job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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add
 it as a part of my work experience.

I attach a full CV and if you require any further
 information, I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy to provide it.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to seeing you.

Yours faithfully
,

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Eman
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AL-Molayki