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A letter to Mr Brown, Alisher Navoi library Tashkent complaining that the books them were not those you had ordered for. Ask for replacement .

A letter to Mr Brown, Alisher Navoi library Tashkent complaining that the books them were not those you had ordered for. Ask for replacement. oEQRD
Dear Mr Brown. I am writing to complain about the books which I asked you to sent me several English books a weeks ago. I asked only those books which I had seen from internet. When I called to your workers they said that they have the same books at the moment and they can send me them after two days as it is far from your library. Of ourse I immedetly payed them by my credit card. So there is no problem with money. So my house is from your library and takes much time to come here. I waited these books for a week. But your deliveries brought me quite onother books. When I said them about it, they becoming to refuse. So do not know what to do. Please solve this problem. And contact with me. Mark Admin
Dear Mr Brown. I am writing to complain about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
which I asked you to
Did you mean "send"?
sent
me several English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a week" or simply "weeks"?
a weeks
ago. I asked
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
those
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
which I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
from internet. When I called to your workers they said that they have the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
at the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
moment and
they can
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send
me them after two days as it is far from your library. Of
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ourse
I
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immedetly
Only in a nautical context 'payed' is an acceptable past tense form of 'pay'. Please check!
payed
them by my credit card.
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So
there is no problem with money.
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So
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
is from your library and takes much time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here. I waited these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
for a week.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
your deliveries brought me quite
Possible spelling mistake found.
onother
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. When I said them about it,
Did you mean "they're becoming", "they are becoming", or "they were becoming"?
they becoming
to refuse.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
do not know what to do.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
solve this problem. And contact with me. Mark
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Admin
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IELTS letter A letter to Mr Brown, Alisher Navoi library Tashkent complaining that the books them were not those you had ordered for. Ask for replacement.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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