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Detailed information regarding the dates Program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups

Detailed information regarding the dates Program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups ABnaw

Dear Mr. Rakesh, I am writing this letter with the intent to enquire about the symposium on Work Life Balance which is scheduled in the next week. As you know how stressful it has become to cope up with balancing both the office and the and the home, I along with ten of my team members are really keen not to miss this meeting. I would like to know about the dates for the seminar, as it would be extremely convenient if it’s on the weekend. Also, I would like to know about the complete arrangement of the conference so that each one of us can plan accordingly beforehand. All of us were really willing to know the amount of fee we require to pay to become part of this special event. It would be extremely generous of you if we a group of ten participants are considered for some sort of waiver. I really look forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Nitish khajuria

Dear Mr. Rakesh,

I am writing this letter with the intent to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about the symposium on It seems that a hyphen is missing.Work-Life
Work Life
 Balance which is scheduled
 in the next
 week.

As you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 how stressful it has become to cope up with balancing both the office and the and the home, I along with ten of my team members are really
 keen not to miss this meeting. I would like to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 about the dates for the seminar, as it would be extremely
 convenient if it’s on the weekend.

Also
, I would like to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 about the complete arrangement of the conference This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that each one of us can plan accordingly
 beforehand.

All of us were really
 willing to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnoticerecognizeappreciateperceiveexperiencesee
know
 the amount of fee we require Did you mean "paying"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.paying
to pay
 to become part of this special This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
. It would be extremely
 generous of you if we a group of ten participants are considered
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 sort of waiver.

I really
 look forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Nitesh
Nitish
Possible spelling mistake found.sharia
khajuria