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Your local council has been doing roadworks to install new internet cables along the road house. This has caused a lot of noise and inconvenience . Write a letter to your local councillor to complain. In your letter a) Describe what has happened b) Say why you are complaining c) Explain what you would like your councillor to do

Your local council has been doing roadworks to install new internet cables along the road house. This has caused a lot of noise and inconvenience. Write a letter to your local councillor to complain. In your letter a) Describe what has happened b) Say why you are complaining c) Explain what you would like your councillor to do 6xP3r
Dear Mr. Brown, I am writing to complain about the sound and disruption created by the workers and machines, working on the installation of internet cables on the road house. As a resident of the road house, I am facing these difficulties for a week now. Workers are also disrespectful to the locals and make a lot of noise disturbing the people living in the surrounding. It is almost impossible for me to concentrate on my work, as there is work from home going on. The workers have been making unbearable sound throughout the whole day and to top it off, machines are also too loud. I talked with the supervisor about the noise and instruments about 3 days ago since then, there is no change in the situation. I would be happy if you can take some kind of action against the workers because this kind of behavior should not be tolerated at any place. And if possible to arrange the maintenance on the equipment used at this site for noise. I would appreciate your imediate attention to this matters. Yours faithful Harsh
Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to complain about the sound and disruption created by the
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and machines, working on the installation of internet cables on the road
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As a resident of the road
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, I am facing these difficulties for a week
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disrespectful to the locals and
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make
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a lot of
noise disturbing the
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people
living in the surrounding. It is almost impossible for me to concentrate on my work, as there is work from home going on.

The
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workers
have been making unbearable sound throughout the whole day and to top it off, machines are
also
too loud. I talked with the supervisor about the noise and instruments about 3 days ago since then, there is no
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change
in the situation.

I would be happy if you can take
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some
kind of action against the
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workers
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because
this kind of behavior should not
be tolerated
at any place. And if possible to arrange the maintenance on the equipment
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used
at this site for noise.

I would appreciate your
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imediate
attention to this matters.

Yours faithful

Harsh

IELTS letter Your local council has been doing roadworks to install new internet cables along the road house. This has caused a lot of noise and inconvenience. Write a letter to your local councillor to complain. In your letter a) Describe what has happened b) Say why you are complaining c) Explain what you would like your councillor to do

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