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Write a letter to the museum director

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email to express my wishes of taking the part-time voluntary at the museum. Since I was a child I have admired each sculpture, picture, and scheletons that our museum has been sheltered for more than 20 years. Throughout these years I have visited this museum each saturday at 2 p. m whereas it represent a space full of peace and inspiration, I know each asile, zone, even the fire alarm locations. Although this voluntary opportunity would look great on my resume, the reason why I want to have this voluntary is because I love it, I feel that I can be myself when I am in it. On the other hand, I would like to share with you the big impact this museum has had on my life, I have decided to study history at the University of Toronto, I am coursing my fourth semester, and I may assure you that all I know, I owe to this musem and a bunch of books. Please, be noticed that I could start as soon as you let me know, moreover I am available during weekdays from 11: 00 a. m to 6 p. m, and on weekend from 11: 00 a. m to 4: 00 p. m. I will be looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you. Sincerely, Luisa Benavides
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this email to express my wishes of taking the part-time voluntary at the
museum
. Since I was a child I have admired each sculpture, picture, and
scheletons
that our
museum
has
been sheltered
for more than 20 years. Throughout these years I have visited this
museum
each
saturday
at 2 p. m whereas it
represent
a space full of peace and inspiration, I know each
asile
, zone, even the fire alarm locations. Although this voluntary opportunity would look great on my resume, the reason why I want to have this voluntary is
because
I
love
it, I feel that I can be myself when I am in it.

On the other hand
, I would like to share with you the
big
impact this
museum
has had on my life, I have decided to study history at the University of Toronto, I am coursing my fourth semester, and I may assure you that all I know, I owe to this
musem
and a bunch of books.

Please
,
be noticed
that I could
start
as
soon
as you
let
me know,
moreover
I am available during weekdays from 11: 00 a. m to 6 p. m, and on weekend from 11: 00 a. m to 4: 00 p. m.

I will be looking forward to hearing from you.

Thank you.

Sincerely
,

Luisa
Benavides
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the museum director

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
227 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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