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Write an invitation letter in formal style

Write an invitation letter in formal style OVAPj

Dear Sir. I am pleased to inform you that you are invited to the 'Flowers Party '. The holiday will be held on 25th May 2021 at 10: 30 a. m on our National Park. At the event you may see various types of flowers especially roses. In addition to this for our honorable guests we will prepare lunch and an amazing game. In the game you must answer about 10 questions on the theme 'How to grow flowers correctly '. If you answer right all the questions, you have a chance to win 10 million. All things are for you to spend you time enjoyable. We sincerely hope that you will able to confirm your attendance at this invitation on or before 23rd May 2021 by contacting us at 5555555. Yours sincerely, Sarah Johnson.

Dear Sir.

I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 to inform you that you are invited
 to the 'Flowers Party '. The holiday will be held
 on 25th May 2021 at 10: 30 a. m on our National Park.

At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 you may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 various types of flowers especially
 roses. In addition
 to this for our honorable guests we will prepare lunch and an amazing game.

In the game you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 answer about 10 questions on the theme 'How to grow flowers correctly
 '. If you answer right all the questions, you have a chance to win 10 million.

All things are for you to spend you time enjoyable.

We sincerely
 hope that you Did you mean "will be able"?will be able
will able
 to confirm your attendance at this invitation on or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 23rd May 2021 by contacting us at 5555555.

Yours sincerely
,

Sarah Johnson. 

IELTS letter Write an invitation letter in formal style

Letter

American English

8 paragraphs

135 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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