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Write an invitation letter in formal style

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Dear Sir. I am pleased to inform you that you are invited to the 'Flowers Party '. The holiday will be held on 25th May 2021 at 10: 30 a. m on our National Park. At the event you may see various types of flowers especially roses. In addition to this for our honorable guests we will prepare lunch and an amazing game. In the game you must answer about 10 questions on the theme 'How to grow flowers correctly '. If you answer right all the questions, you have a chance to win 10 million. All things are for you to spend you time enjoyable. We sincerely hope that you will able to confirm your attendance at this invitation on or before 23rd May 2021 by contacting us at 5555555. Yours sincerely, Sarah Johnson.
Dear Sir.

I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to inform you that you
are invited
to the 'Flowers Party '. The holiday will
be held
on 25th May 2021 at 10: 30 a. m on our National Park.

At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
you may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
various types of flowers
especially
roses.
In addition
to this for our honorable guests we will prepare lunch and an amazing game.

In the game you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
answer about 10 questions on the theme 'How to grow flowers
correctly
'. If you answer right all the questions, you have a chance to win 10 million.

All things are for you to spend you time enjoyable.

We
sincerely
hope that you
Did you mean "will be able"?
will able
to confirm your attendance at this invitation on or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
23rd May 2021 by contacting us at 5555555.

Yours
sincerely
,

Sarah Johnson.
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IELTS letter Write an invitation letter in formal style

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
135 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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