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Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Write a letter to someone. You should tell why you enjoyed the trip what you are doing now invite her to visit you

Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Write a letter to someone. You should tell why you enjoyed the trip what you are doing now invite her to visit you 2b02M
Dear Raman, Hope you’re doing well and best of spirits. Its been a long we have had the catch up and reminisce about things. Lets meet anytime soon, if possible. Anyway I’m writing this letter to express my feeling about the latest trip in Canada with my colleague Ankit. The trip was organized by our company in multinational industry in Toronto in addition, All the expenses were managed by our them like tickets, accommodation in 4 star hotel and food. Overall, it was the best outing of my life we both enjoyed a lot. Its like we kill two birds with one stone we done our project and also visit most beautiful country owing to the fact that I had a dream from a long time to visit Canada therefore my dream come true. After completed our working project we visited various places such as Niagara fall, CN tower and many shopping malls. Now I am working on another assignment it will be finished by end of this week. Would you mind why you are not visiting my place thus, we can meet each other and also I will show you our pictures of trip. I look forward to seeing you soon. Best regards, Amrita
Dear
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Raman
,

Hope you’re doing well and best of spirits.
Did you mean "It's" (="It has") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
been a long we have had the catch up and reminisce about things.
Did you mean "Let's" (let's = let us; lets = 3rd person singular of 'let')?
Lets
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meet
anytime
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soon
, if possible. Anyway I’m writing this letter to express my feeling about the latest trip in Canada with my colleague Ankit.

The trip
was organized
by our
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company
in multinational industry in Toronto
in addition
, All the expenses
were managed
by our them like tickets, accommodation in
'4 star' is missing a hyphen.
4 star
hotel and food.
Overall
, it was the best outing of my life we both enjoyed a lot. Its like we kill two birds with one stone we done our project and
also
visit most
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beautiful
country owing to the fact that I had a dream from a long time to visit Canada
therefore
my dream
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come
true. After completed our working project we visited various places such as Niagara fall,
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CN tower
and
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many
shopping malls.
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Now
I am working on another assignment it will
be finished
by
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end
of this week. Would you mind why you are not visiting my place
thus
, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
each other and
also
I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
you our pictures of trip.

I look forward to seeing you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best regards,

Amrita
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IELTS letter Recently you visited a foreign country with a friend. Write a letter to someone. You should tell why you enjoyed the trip what you are doing now invite her to visit you

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
204 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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