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Your friend wrote a letter to you asking advice on their parents visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend. - Suggest the places they can visit - recommend a place where they can stay - offer something you can do with them.

Your friend wrote a letter to you asking advice on their parents visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend. - Suggest the places they can visit - recommend a place where they can stay - offer something you can do with them. KwA0R
Dear Panthini, Hey, How're you? I hope you are doing great. It's been a year I haven't met you. After your family relocation at Mumbai, it's been so hard to keep in touch with you owing to your busy schedule. On receiving you letter, I chose to reply with this letter by providing all the necessary details about planning a small visit of your parents in my town. Since entire area is now changed due to modernization, there are many spots and regions to be considered. To commence, the famous venue in Anand is Amul Factory which is popular for its milk products throughout the world. Moreover, you can also plan to take a look at Sardar Patel Museum which is second best place to visit. In addition, there are many restaurants with leisure activities targeting any age group and with multiple cuisine options. In order to stay during this whole week period in my hometown, I would like to advice you a new opening in the city called Hotel H which is well known for its food and hospitality. However, as far as I know, your parents are from those who like to chater with near ones thus, I would like to point on an empty flat in my neighbourhood. It would be great if they are with me so that I can check them and we all can have a great time. I would also like to take them for a family dinner after watching movie. Let me know about your preference and a final plan. Best Wishes, Trushna Patel
Dear
Panthini
, Hey, How're you? I hope you are doing great. It's been a year I haven't met you. After your family relocation at Mumbai, it's been
so
hard
to
keep
in touch with you owing to your busy schedule. On receiving you letter, I chose to reply with this letter by providing all the necessary
details
about planning a
small
visit of your parents in my town. Since entire area is
now
changed
due to modernization, there are
many
spots and regions to
be considered
. To commence, the
famous
venue in Anand is
Amul
Factory which is popular for its milk products throughout the world.
Moreover
, you can
also
plan to take a look at
Sardar
Patel Museum which is second best place to visit.
In addition
, there are
many
restaurants with leisure activities targeting any age group and with multiple cuisine options. In order to stay during this whole week period in my hometown, I would like to advice you a new opening in the city called Hotel H which is well known for its food and hospitality.
However
, as far as I know, your parents are from those who like to
chater
with near ones
thus
, I would like to point on an empty flat in my
neighbourhood
. It would be great if they are with me
so
that I can
check
them and
we all can have a great time. I would
also
like to take them for a family dinner after watching movie.
Let
me know about your preference and a final plan. Best Wishes,
Trushna
Patel
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IELTS letter Your friend wrote a letter to you asking advice on their parents visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend. - Suggest the places they can visit - recommend a place where they can stay - offer something you can do with them.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
261 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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