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Dear Hotel Manager, I am writing this letter to inquire about the rooms available on the coming weekend for three people in your hotel. we need room for three nights and two days. It will be our first visit to Dubai, so we don't know much about the best hotels in Dubai. That's why I took help from my trusted friend Google to find out about the hotel. When I was browsing about the top 5 hotels in Dubai, Ramada comes up at the top. Moreover, I checked all the reviews on another website like goibibo also which are pretty good regarding your service. However, I couldn't find furthermore details like room size, advance booking, and charges. It would be highly appreciable if you could provide us with smoke-free rooms as my friend is allergic to cigarettes. I hope you will look into this matter and please send me the details before Friday so that we can choose the best and proceed to book. I am looking forward to your response and Thank you in anticipation. Regards,
Dear
Hotel
Manager,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the
rooms
available on the coming weekend for three
people
in your
hotel
.
we
need
room
for three nights and two days.

It will be our
first
visit to Dubai,
so
we don't know much about the best
hotels
in Dubai. That's why I took
help
from my trusted friend Google to find out about the
hotel
. When I was browsing about the top 5
hotels
in Dubai, Ramada
comes
up at the top.
Moreover
, I
checked
all the reviews on another website like
goibibo
also
which are pretty
good
regarding your service.
However
, I couldn't find
furthermore
details
like
room
size, advance booking, and charges. It would be
highly
appreciable if you could provide us with smoke-free
rooms
as my friend is allergic to cigarettes.

I hope you will look into this matter and
please
send
me the
details
before
Friday
so
that we can choose the best and proceed to book.

I am looking forward to your response and Thank you in anticipation.

Regards,
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IELTS letter write a letter about vacation

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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