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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I was very impressed after completing the cooking course offered by Happy to Cook. Even though the course was limited to Indian food, but it really helped me develop my cutting and chopping skills which are common for all cuisines. Moreover, Mr Kumar, our instructor and mentor was very patient and his live demonstrations on various Indian dishes really helped me. Furthermore, I also really enjoyed the group task in which we formed teams to cook a few traditional dishes. Having said that, since completing my course last month, I have already cooked around a dozen time. I have cooked a no of dishes ranging from palak paneer to chicken biriyani and my entire family was really flattered in my cooking skills. Additionally, I would also request you to start a European Cooking Course in which all the traditional European dishes like pasta & pizza to name a few, can be taught as meticulously as the previous one. I would be really much interested in joining the course as I am a big fan of such cuisine. Thank you and looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Debjit
Dear Sir or Madam,

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was limited
to Indian food,
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it
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helped
me develop my cutting and chopping
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skills
which are common for all cuisines.
Moreover
, Mr Kumar, our instructor and mentor was
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very
patient and his
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live
demonstrations on various Indian dishes
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really
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helped
me.
Furthermore
, I
also
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really
enjoyed the group task in which we formed teams to cook a few traditional dishes.

Having said that, since completing my
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course
last month, I have already cooked around a dozen time. I have cooked a
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no
of dishes ranging from
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palak
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paneer
to chicken
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biriyani
and my entire family was
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really
flattered in my cooking
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skills
.

Additionally
, I would
also
request you to
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start
a European Cooking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Course
in which all the traditional European dishes like pasta & pizza to name a few, can
be taught
as
meticulously
as the previous one. I would be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
much interested in joining the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
as I am a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
fan of such cuisine.

Thank you and looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Debjit
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IELTS letter some people that men and women are equal.

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200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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