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Dear Mr. Sinh, Based on the information discussed at the meeting yesterday, the two teams of us are supposed to have a meeting on Wednesday 20th October, but due to the huge changes in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to finish the file. Therefore, we offer that the next meeting will be as follows: Date: Thursday 21st October 2021 Time: 2:00 PM Brand2 is working closely to fix the brochure and will send you soon. Please watch the brochure carefully and give us your feedback.

Dear Mr. Sinh, Based on the information discussed at the meeting yesterday, the two teams of us are supposed to have a meeting on Wednesday 20th October, but due to the huge changes in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to finish the file. Therefore, we offer that the next meeting will be as follows: Date: Thursday 21st October 2021 Time: 2: 00 PM Brand2 is working closely to fix the brochure and will send you soon. Please watch the brochure carefully and give us your feedback. qaBRw
Dear Mr. Sinh, Based on the information discussed at the meeting yesterday, the two teams of us are supposed to have a meeting on Wednesday 20th October, but due to the huge changes in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to finish the file. Therefore, we offer that the next meeting will be as follows: Date: Thursday 21st October 2021 Time: 2: 00 PM Brand2 is working closely to fix the brochure and will send you soon. Please watch the brochure carefully and give us your feedback.
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due to the huge
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in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to
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finish
the file.

Therefore
, we offer that the
next
meeting will be as follows:

Date: Thursday 21st October 2021

Time: 2: 00 PM

Brand2 is working
closely
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fix
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send
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IELTS letter Dear Mr. Sinh, Based on the information discussed at the meeting yesterday, the two teams of us are supposed to have a meeting on Wednesday 20th October, but due to the huge changes in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to finish the file. Therefore, we offer that the next meeting will be as follows: Date: Thursday 21st October 2021 Time: 2: 00 PM Brand2 is working closely to fix the brochure and will send you soon. Please watch the brochure carefully and give us your feedback.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
92 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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