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Dear Mr. Sinh, Based on the information discussed at the meeting yesterday, the two teams of us are supposed to have a meeting on Wednesday 20th October, but due to the huge changes in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to finish the file. Therefore, we offer that the next meeting will be as follows: Date: Thursday 21st October 2021 Time: 2:00 PM Brand2 is working closely to fix the brochure and will send you soon. Please watch the brochure carefully and give us your feedback.

Dear Mr. Sinh, Based on the information discussed at the meeting yesterday, the two teams of us are supposed to have a meeting on Wednesday 20th October, but due to the huge changes in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to finish the file. Therefore, we offer that the next meeting will be as follows: Date: Thursday 21st October 2021 Time: 2: 00 PM Brand2 is working closely to fix the brochure and will send you soon. Please watch the brochure carefully and give us your feedback. qaBRw
Dear Mr. Sinh, Based on the information discussed at the meeting yesterday, the two teams of us are supposed to have a meeting on Wednesday 20th October, but due to the huge changes in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to finish the file. Therefore, we offer that the next meeting will be as follows: Date: Thursday 21st October 2021 Time: 2: 00 PM Brand2 is working closely to fix the brochure and will send you soon. Please watch the brochure carefully and give us your feedback.
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Based on the information discussed at the meeting yesterday, the two teams of us
are supposed
to have a meeting on Wednesday 20th October,
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but
due to the huge
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changes
in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to
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finish
the file.

Therefore
, we offer that the
next
meeting will be as follows:

Date: Thursday 21st October 2021

Time: 2: 00 PM

Brand2 is working
closely
to
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fix
the brochure and will
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send
you
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soon
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Please
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watch
the brochure
carefully
and give us your feedback.

IELTS letter Dear Mr. Sinh, Based on the information discussed at the meeting yesterday, the two teams of us are supposed to have a meeting on Wednesday 20th October, but due to the huge changes in the layout of the brochure, we need a bit more time to finish the file. Therefore, we offer that the next meeting will be as follows: Date: Thursday 21st October 2021 Time: 2: 00 PM Brand2 is working closely to fix the brochure and will send you soon. Please watch the brochure carefully and give us your feedback.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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