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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take ylXD
In this competitive world, Advertising has became a major role for any product's success. In my point of view advertisements are useful as they tell us about new products and make us all aware of what are there in the market. Advertisements help people know what type of things are in availablity. Based on own experience I would like to consider an item which I have heard of or which Im aware about, for example when I want to buy a mopping stick for cleaning purpose but I have seen an ad on vaccum cleaning device. Mopping stick is something I need to work hard to clean my room but because of the advertisment I became aware of the vaccum device which in turn helped to reduce my work and time to spent on cleaning my room. This is a small scenario which explains how advertisement make our lives easy. I would like to contradict the statement " Advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need", this statements comes into play only when a person does not have self control or disciplain. Its always a person's choice or their self assesement to decide whether the product is useful or not. For example, Amazon echo or google nest is not totally useful untill you have most of you electronic devices are smart devices. So we need to be self aware to judge an advertisment and its usefulness. If there are no adversiments, we would even not be aware of a product which results in using traditional items and may not improve our lives.
In this competitive world, Advertising has
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became
a major role for any product's success. In my point of view advertisements are useful as they
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tell
us about new products and
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make
us all
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aware
of what are there in the market.

Advertisements
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help
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people
know what type of things are in
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availablity
. Based on
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own
experience I would like to consider an item which I have heard of or which
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Im
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aware
about,
for example
when I want to
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buy
a mopping stick for cleaning purpose
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but
I have
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seen
an ad on
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vaccum
cleaning
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device
. Mopping stick is something I need to work
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hard
to clean my room
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but
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because
of the
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advertisment
I became
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aware
of the
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vaccum
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device
which in turn
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helped
to
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reduce
my work and time to spent on cleaning my room. This is a
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small
scenario which
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explains
how advertisement
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make
our
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lives
easy.

I would like to contradict the statement
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"
Advertising encourages us to
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buy
things that we
really
do not need
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"
, this statements
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comes
into play
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only
when a person does not have
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self control
or
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disciplain
.
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Its
always a person's choice or their self
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assesement
to decide whether the product is useful or not.
For example
,
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Amazon echo
or google nest is not
totally
useful
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untill
you have most of you electronic
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devices
are smart
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devices
.
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So
we need to be self
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aware
to judge an
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advertisment
and its usefulness.

If there are no
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adversiments
, we would even not be
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aware
of a product which results in using traditional items and may not
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improve
our
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lives
.
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IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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