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To write an invitation letter

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Dear Sara! I am writing to inform you, that we have a special event for our family. You know that me elder sister graduated from the university last year and she has a boyfriend who is waiting for her last three years. At last they decided not to delay the most memorable date in their life. So they are ready to marry! ! ! My sister's wedding party is going to held on December, 30. It will be the best wedding you have ever been! The party is planned to take place at " City Council Wedding Palace". I hope you can come. Best regardsNina.

Dear Sara! I am writing to inform you, that we have a special This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 for our family. You know that me elder sister graduated from the university last Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).year, and
year and
 she has a boyfriend who is waiting for her last three years. At The comma is probably missing here: "last, they".last, they
last they
 decided not to delay the most memorable date in their life. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 they are ready to marry! ! ! My sister's wedding party is going to 'Going to' requires the base form: "hold"hold
held
 on December, 30. It will be the best wedding you have ever been! The party is planned
 to take place at Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbolapply
" 
City Council Wedding PalaceUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
. I hope you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
. Best Possible spelling mistake found.regards Nina
regardsNina
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