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Your frind is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice 1. Why a driving license is advantageous 2. Recommend a driving school 3. Give any extra guidance/tips

Your frind is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice 1. Why a driving license is advantageous 2. Recommend a driving school 3. Give any extra guidance/tips r8eN2
Dear John, I was thrilled to hear that you have decided to learn to drive. I remember us discussing on this the last time we met. I’m writing this letter to give you some ideas on the same. Hopefully, this should be useful when you begin your lessons. Having a driving license will definitely prove to be handy and help you become independent. I’m sure, there would have been multiple instances where you had to wait for public transportation to reach your destination. Learning to drive and having your own license will empower you to be self-reliant. Thus, making you feel more confident. I would recommend you to join the Driving School, “Drive Away”, where I took my classes. This place had well informed instructors who patiently helped me through out. The Institute also had equipped cars to take care of the safety aspect while we are learning. It is of utmost importance to understand the traffic guidelines and driving rules and stick to them at all times. Keep in mind, we have the responsibility of our safety as well as others. I wish you a happy driving and learning experience. Yours Lovingly, Vasundra
Dear John,

I
was thrilled
to hear that you have decided to learn to drive. I remember us discussing on this the last time we met.
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’m writing this letter to give you
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some
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ideas
on the same.
Hopefully
, this should be useful when you
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begin
your lessons.

Having a
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driving
license will definitely prove to be handy and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you become independent. I’m sure, there would have been multiple instances where you had to wait for public transportation to reach your destination. Learning to drive and having your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
license will empower you to be self-reliant.
Thus
, making you feel more confident. I would recommend you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the
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Driving
School, “Drive Away”, where I took my classes. This place had
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well informed
instructors who
patiently
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helped
me
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through out
. The Institute
also
had equipped cars to take care of the safety aspect while we are learning.

It is of utmost importance to understand the traffic guidelines and
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driving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and stick to them at all times.
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Keep
in mind, we have the responsibility of our safety
as well
as others. I wish you a happy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
driving
and learning experience.

Yours
Lovingly
,

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Vasundra
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IELTS letter Your frind is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice 1. Why a driving license is advantageous 2. Recommend a driving school 3. Give any extra guidance/tips

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6.0
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