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Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: • State why you cannot go – an emergency came up from the office • Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner – busy schedule • Suggest another time to meet – next weekend

Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: • State why you cannot go – an emergency came up from the office • Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner – busy schedule • Suggest another time to meet – next weekend awyNm
Dear Carol, Belated Happy Birthday! I am deeply sorry for missing your special day. As much as I would like to go, I wasn’t able to attend due to an emergency situation at the office. As you know, we are going live in New Zealand very soon. Unfortunately, the day before your birthday, the servers shut down unexpectedly and the project was on halt because of that situation. It was really a showstopper and we couldn’t find a workaround to solve the problem. It took us 2 days to solve the issue, and it also took us two days of no sleep. Due to stress, your birthday completely slipped off my mind and I totally forgot to message you ahead of time. To make it up with you, please allow me to invite you next weekend for a dinner get-together at your favourite restaurant in Marina Bay. I hope that you are available at 7PM, otherwise let me know your most convenient time. Again, my sincere apologies for what happened and looking forward to see you this weekend. Yours Truly, Mariel
Dear Carol,

Belated Happy Birthday! I am
deeply
sorry for missing your special day. As much as I would like to go, I wasn’t able to attend due to an emergency situation at the office.

As you know, we are going
live
in New Zealand
very
soon
. Unfortunately, the day
before
your birthday, the servers shut down
unexpectedly
and the project was on halt
because
of that situation. It was
really
a
showstopper and
we couldn’t find a workaround to solve the problem.

It took us 2 days to solve the issue, and it
also
took us two days of no sleep. Due to
stress
, your birthday completely slipped off my mind and I
totally
forgot to message you ahead of time.

To
make
it up with you,
please
allow
me to invite you
next
weekend for a dinner
get
-together at your
favourite
restaurant in Marina Bay. I hope that you are available at 7PM,
otherwise
let
me know your most convenient time.

Again, my sincere apologies for what happened and looking forward to
see
you this weekend.

Yours
Truly
,

Mariel
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IELTS letter Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you are unable to attend. Write a letter apologizing for your absence. In your letter: • State why you cannot go – an emergency came up from the office • Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner – busy schedule • Suggest another time to meet – next weekend

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  American English
8 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
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