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You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him. In your letter explain the occasion to him

You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him. In your letter explain the occasion to him g5y31
Dear Sir, I am going to write this letter for invite you on my special party. Next month my daughter will be turned on 4th year. Just for that occasion I have arranged a small but great party. Party will be held at Mayur restaurant. I have invited limited number of people. We would like to invite in our occasion. As my family members and specially my daughter like your performance so much. And she has much desire to meet you. More, I want to give her surprise on her birthday. Party will be held on 30/04/2018. Actually she wants you to see a live performance of your performance so that I am telling to you. Also, she has a great collection of your all albums. Even, she consider you as a mentor in her life. She always watch your shows in tv. I know you have very busy schedule, but if you come at our function then it would be happiest of our life. We will eagerly wait for your presence. Yours faithfully, Ricky
Dear Sir, I am going to write this letter for invite you on my special
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
.
Next
month my daughter will
be turned
on 4th year.
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Just
for that occasion I have arranged a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
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but
great
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party
.
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Party
will
be held
at
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Mayur
restaurant. I have invited limited number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. We would like to invite in our occasion. As my family members and
specially
my daughter like your performance
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much. And she has much desire to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you. More, I want to give her surprise on her birthday.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Party
will
be held
on 30/04/2018. Actually she wants you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
performance of your performance
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I am telling
The verb 'to tell someone' does not require a preposition.
to you
.
Also
, she has a great collection of your all albums. Even, she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "considers", "considered".
consider
you as a mentor in her life. She always
The pronoun 'She' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "watches", "watched".
watch
your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
in
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tv
. I know you have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
busy schedule,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
at our function then it would be happiest of our life. We will
eagerly
wait for your presence. Yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Ricky
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IELTS letter You are going to arrange a special party at your home next week. You want to invite a local artist who is a playback singer. Write a letter to him. In your letter explain the occasion to him

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
174 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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