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Your friend would like to visit you, but unfortunately you are not free when they want to come. Write a letter to your friend. Apologise Explain why you are busy Suggest another time

Your friend would like to visit you, but unfortunately you are not free when they want to come. Write a letter to your friend. Apologise Explain why you are busy Suggest another time NVyJd
Hi John, Hope you are doing well, It's been long since we had a good time together. I'm glad to know that you're returning back finally from abroad! Sorry, this weekend may not be our's. I'd love to spend time with you, but have promised to attend my colleagues wedding with family so we can't make it up this week. As he is my close team member i shouldn't miss the function. I knew you are staying here for a month, how about next weekend? I am totally free, we can catch up for a long drive and reminish our time. I'll pick you up from home so can meet your family too. Let me know your thoughts. Lot's of love Park
Hi John,

Hope you are doing well, It's been long since we had a
good
time together. I'm glad to know that you're
returning back
finally
from abroad! Sorry, this weekend may not be
our's
.

I'd
love
to spend time with you,
but
have promised to attend my colleagues wedding with family
so
we can't
make
it up this week.
As
he is my close team member
i
shouldn't miss the function.

I knew you are staying here for a month, how about
next
weekend? I am
totally
free, we can catch up for a long drive and
reminish
our time.

I
'll pick you up from home
so
can
meet
your family too.

Let
me know your thoughts.

Lot's
of
love


Park
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IELTS letter Your friend would like to visit you, but unfortunately you are not free when they want to come. Write a letter to your friend. Apologise Explain why you are busy Suggest another time

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
121 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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