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Request relief flight to embassy

Request relief flight to embassy DNoda
Re: Request letter for arrangement of relief flight for Myanmar Crews who stuck at Mauritius and Dakar, South Africa Dear Sir or Madam of Myanmar Embassy South Africa, I am writing on behalf of HRO, to request any embassy-facilitated flight from Mauritius and Dakar to Myanmar. To repatriate 7 crews from South Africa, there is no flight to Myanmar at the moment and we would like to request that is there any embassy-facilitated flight? Your early attention would be highly appreciated that embassy help us to connect with any relief flight. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us at +65 or send me email admin@swiftmaids. com. sg.
Re: Request letter for arrangement of relief
flight
for Myanmar Crews who stuck at Mauritius and Dakar, South Africa

Dear Sir or Madam of Myanmar Embassy South Africa,

I am writing on behalf of
HRO
, to request any embassy-facilitated
flight
from Mauritius and Dakar to Myanmar. To repatriate 7 crews from South Africa, there is no
flight
to Myanmar at the
moment and
we would like to request
that is
there any embassy-facilitated flight?

Your early attention would be
highly
appreciated that embassy
help
us to connect with any relief
flight
. If you have any questions,
please
feel free to contact us at +65 or
send
me email
admin@swiftmaids
.
com
.
sg
.
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IELTS letter Request relief flight to embassy

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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