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Write e-mail messages telling someone about the cultural traditions in your country.

Write e-mail messages telling someone about the cultural traditions in your country. 1VMWX

Dear Laura: Today I will tell you about Mid-autumn festival in our country. Every year in Mid September, it is customary for people throughout our country to celebrate Mid-autumn festival. People decorate the streets with colorful lanterns. The market are filled with moon cakes, lanterns. . etc. Besides, there are also toy animals such as the dragons, dogs, . . etc, which are made of rice dough. Children in Vietnam really like this festival because they are allowed to hangout with friends and play with their colorful paper lanterns. They also have a chance to see people perform the dragon dance, which is fascinating and intriguing. That is our tradition. How about you? Please tell me, I want to develop my cultural literacy about my country as well as yours. I’m looking forward from hearing from you. Thank you, Tien

Dear Laura:

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