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Write e-mail messages telling someone about the cultural traditions in your country.

Write e-mail messages telling someone about the cultural traditions in your country. 1VMWX
Dear Laura: Today I will tell you about Mid-autumn festival in our country. Every year in Mid September, it is customary for people throughout our country to celebrate Mid-autumn festival. People decorate the streets with colorful lanterns. The market are filled with moon cakes, lanterns. . etc. Besides, there are also toy animals such as the dragons, dogs, . . etc, which are made of rice dough. Children in Vietnam really like this festival because they are allowed to hangout with friends and play with their colorful paper lanterns. They also have a chance to see people perform the dragon dance, which is fascinating and intriguing. That is our tradition. How about you? Please tell me, I want to develop my cultural literacy about my country as well as yours. I’m looking forward from hearing from you. Thank you, Tien
Dear Laura:

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you about Mid-autumn festival in our country.

Every year in Mid September, it is customary for
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people
throughout our country to celebrate Mid-autumn festival.
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decorate the streets with colorful lanterns. The market
are filled
with moon cakes, lanterns.
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toy animals such as the dragons, dogs
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, which
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of rice dough. Children in Vietnam
really
like this festival
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to hangout
with friends and play with their colorful paper lanterns. They
also
have a chance to
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see
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people
perform the dragon dance, which is fascinating and intriguing.

That is
our tradition. How about you?
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Please
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tell
me, I want to develop my cultural literacy about my country
as well
as yours. I’m looking forward from hearing from you.

Thank you,

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Tien
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IELTS letter Write e-mail messages telling someone about the cultural traditions in your country.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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