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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at univrsity. He/she has asked for your advice about studing this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give detail of the course you took ay university, explain why you recommend the university, give some advice about how to apply.

A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at univrsity. He/she has asked for your advice about studing this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give detail of the course you took ay university, explain why you recommend the university, give some advice about how to apply. XQ3Y
Dear Anju, Hello! I hope this letter of mine fine you in pink of your health. I am so pleased to hear from you this you want to continue your studies and I am happy to help you. There are several courses in the university which I found to be useful but choose one of that related to tally accounting. As this is going to help in our jobs. I found this helpful because I was intrested in accounting field. I would highly recommend you the Cambridge University. It is one of the university which I found to be use full in various services provided by them. However, there are experts in related to each field so that studients can be given better study material and good experience. If you want to apply there it would be very simple procedure. Just go the website of collage there will be an option of administration courses. A list will show the available courses with full detail. Go for that. If you need to know anything else, just get in touch with me and don't forget to give my love to all your family. Your loving, Jyoti
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studies and
I am happy to
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help
you. There are several courses in the university which I found to be useful
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choose one of that related to tally accounting.
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this is going to
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help
in our jobs. I found this helpful
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because
I was
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intrested
in accounting field. I would
highly
recommend you the Cambridge University. It is one of the university which I found to be
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use
full in various services provided by them.
However
, there are experts in related to each field
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so
that
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studients
can be
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given
better study material and
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good
experience.
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If
you want to apply there it would be
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very
simple procedure.
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Just
go the website of collage there will be an option of administration courses. A list will
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show
the available courses with full detail. Go for that. If you need to know anything else,
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just
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get
in touch with me and don't forget to give my
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love
to all your family.
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Your
loving,
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Jyoti
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at univrsity. He/she has asked for your advice about studing this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give detail of the course you took ay university, explain why you recommend the university, give some advice about how to apply.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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