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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. y2bE
Dear Teachers I hope you all will be in the best of your health. I am writing to inform that I will not be able to continue my on-going course. As you all are aware that to meet the expenses i am employed at a full-time job. Recently, the timings at my office were revised and I was transferred to an evening shift. It is expected that the timings will be revised in the next month. The new timings at my office, are conflicting with my on-going course hours. This job is what I depend on for my household expenses and I find it hard to quit at this time. Therefore, I won't be able to continue my course. I would request, to shift me to the morning scheduled class, so that i can continue the program. I hope that a decision best suited for me will be taken, keeping in mind the situation I am currently in. Yours Sincerely Tony Ferguson
Dear Teachers

I hope you all will be in the best of your health. I am writing to inform that I will not be able to continue my
Did you mean "ongoing"?
on-going
course.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you all are aware that to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the expenses
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am employed
at a full-time job. Recently, the timings at my office were
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
revised and
I
was transferred
to an evening shift. It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
that the timings will
be revised
in the
next
month.

The new timings at my office, are conflicting with my
Did you mean "ongoing"?
on-going
course hours. This job is what I depend on for my household expenses and I find it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to quit at this time.
Therefore
, I won't be able to continue my course.

I would request, to shift me to the morning scheduled
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
Did you mean "I"?
i
can continue the program.

I hope that a decision best suited for me will
be taken
, keeping in mind the situation I am
currently
in.

Yours
Sincerely


Tony Ferguson
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
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