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your friend who lives in a another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday.You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to friend. In your letter, Thank him.her for invitation,Explain why cant you come and Ask him avout other times to visit

your friend who lives in a another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to friend. In your letter, Thank him. her for invitation, Explain why cant you come and Ask him avout other times to visit qEer

Hello Jessie, Hope you are doing well! It has been a long time since we last wrote. I would like to thank you for the invitation to visit you. Sorry, but I will not be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule. I have recently started a new job and have been bogged down with a lot of work. With multiple deadlines around the corner, I have been working day in day out. I don’t mean to complain; I have been enjoying it immensely. It’s a really great opportunity to work alongside people whom you have admired all your life. Could you let me know of another time when I can visit you? I would really love to meet your family and explore London. I will be free around Christmas as my company would be under a holiday freeze. I would definitely like to escape the scorching heat for some snowfall! Take care and stay safe. Best Wishes. Avneet

Hello Jessie,

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but
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make
 it due to my hectic work schedule.

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started
 a new job and have been bogged
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a lot of
 work. With multiple deadlines around the corner, I have been working day in day out. I don’t mean to complain; I have been enjoying it immensely
. It’s a really
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people
 whom you have admired all your life.

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let
 me know of another time when I can visit you? I would really
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love
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meet
 your family and explore London. I will be free around Christmas as my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 would be under a holiday freeze. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would definitely like to escape the scorching heat for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 snowfall!

Take care and stay safe.

Best Wishes.

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