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There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there.

There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there. dYVd
Dear Friend, I will inviting you to visit my country. in next month in my country biggest traditional celebration. Many foreign people come to join this celebration. In this day my people participate different activies like traditional dance and make traditional food provide all the people. This traditional celebration people enjoy full day. alot of fun in this day. you can come and see my country traditional celebration I know you like this to much. traditional celebration people make food which is traditional in my country. you can eat without any pay money and see the different kinds of road show. you capture picture on you camera. I hope you
Dear Friend,

I will
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inviting
you to visit my
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country
.
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in
next
month in my
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country
biggest
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traditional
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celebration
.
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Many
foreign
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people
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come
to
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join
this
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celebration
. In this day my
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people
participate
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different
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activies
like
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traditional
dance and
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make
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traditional
food provide all the
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people
. This
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traditional
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celebration
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people
enjoy full day.
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alot
of fun in this day.
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you
can
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come
and
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see
my
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country
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traditional
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celebration
I know you like this
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to
much.
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traditional
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celebration
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people
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make
food which is
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traditional
in my
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country
.
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you
can eat without any pay money and
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see
the
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different
kinds of road
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show
.
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you
capture picture on you camera.

I hope you

IELTS letter There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
109 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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