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you stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. write a letter and explain: - how you enjoyed staying with your friend. -explain the object wich you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - mention how you plan to return the object. write at least 150 words.

you stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. write a letter and explain: - how you enjoyed staying with your friend. -explain the object wich you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - mention how you plan to return the object. ky6N
Hi Peter I am appreciate for your warm welcome last night. The meal you prepared was really fantastic and an amazing game time had been made after the dinner. Do you remember you lend me an USB to transfer photos to your computer? I forgot to return the USB to you. After I copied photos to your computer, I immediatelly put the USB in my pocket, which is my usual practise in the office to prevent losing the USB. I swear that I only took it home by accident. Hope you will accept my apology. Are you urgent to use the USB? If so, I will come to you home and return it tonight. If not, I will invite you to come to my home this Saturday, for the returning and the great game time, again. I look forward to your reply soon and have a nice day. Cheers Sam
Hi Peter

I am appreciate for your warm welcome last night. The meal you prepared was
really
fantastic and an amazing game time had
been made
after the dinner.

Do you remember you lend me
an
USB to transfer photos to your computer? I forgot to return the USB to you. After I copied photos to your computer, I
immediatelly
put the USB in my pocket, which is my usual
practise
in the office to
prevent
losing the USB. I swear that I
only
took it home by accident. Hope you will accept my apology.

Are you urgent to
use
the USB? If
so
, I will
come
to you home and return it tonight. If not, I will invite you to
come
to my home this Saturday, for the returning and the great game time, again.

I look forward to your reply
soon
and have a nice day.

Cheers

Sam
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IELTS letter you stayed with your friend and by mistake carried home one of his objects. write a letter and explain: - how you enjoyed staying with your friend. -explain the object wich you brought with you by mistake and explain how the mistake happened. - mention how you plan to return the object.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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