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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take PQgK
Dear Kavi, Im writing to you in response to your complain for loud noice yeterday night. Iam very sorry for loud noise in our apartment, last night we had a small party with my office friends as one of my friend got promoted as a supervisor in my company. unfortunately all the clubs were closed due to lockdown, so there was no choice for me except our house. I feel regret in writing this letter, i know you have small kids in your house and an old woman. my sincere apologise for each and everyone for yeterday night. I can assure you it will not happen anymore from now on, Moreover i will change my visitng hours with friends in early morning rather than night time. I hope you accept my apology for this time. yours faithfully, akshay kumar.
Dear
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Kavi
,

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Im
writing to you in response to your
The usual collocation for "complain" is "about" not "for". Did you mean "complain about"?
complain for
loud
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noice
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yeterday
night.

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Iam
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very
sorry for loud noise in our apartment, last night we had a
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small
party with my office friends as one of my friend
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got
promoted as a supervisor in my
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company
.
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unfortunately
all the clubs
were closed
due to lockdown,
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so
there was no choice for me except our
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house
.

I feel regret in writing this letter,
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i
know you have
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small
kids in your
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house
and an
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old
woman.
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my
sincere
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apologise
for each and
Did you mean "every one"?
everyone
for
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yeterday
night.

I can assure you it will not happen
Make sure that 'anymore' is used as an adverb, not as an adjective. Did you mean "any more"?
anymore
from
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now
on,
Moreover
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i
will
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change
my
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visitng
hours with friends in early morning
rather
than
This word is normally spelled as one.
night time
.

I hope you accept my apology for this time.

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yours
faithfully
,

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akshay
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kumar
.

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
139 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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