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A friend of yours is going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice

A friend of yours is going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice K7nL

Dear Jim, I am absolutely delighted to hear from you. I'd always encourage my friends to go camping, as that brings you so close to nature and sets your mind free from the daily hustle and bustle of the city. I believe, you would have an extravagant time as you love bonfires and to wake up to the sun rising in the midst of nature. However, I'd like to point out that there could be some possible difficulties. It's obvious that the toilets wouldn't be easily accessible and you would have to make do with the food and beverages you get form home. Lets hope for good weather on that particular day, as a bit of rain could ruin the evening for us. I'd be happy to join you camping this summer, as you know how much i love camping. When do you plan to actually do it? It would be great if we could workout a weekend, as i'd have my mind away from work. Your amazing friend, Bryce

Dear Jim,

I am absolutely
 delighted to hear from you. I'd always encourage my friends to go camping, as that brings you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 close to nature and sets your mind free from the daily hustle and bustle of the city. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 believe, you would have an extravagant time as you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 bonfires and to wake up to the sun rising in the midst of nature.

However
, I'd like to point out that there could be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 possible difficulties. It's obvious that the toilets wouldn't be easily
 accessible and you would This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 do with the food and beverages you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 form home. Did you mean "Let's" (let's = let us; lets = 3rd person singular of 'let')?Let's
Lets
 hope for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 weather on that particular day, as a bit of rain could ruin the evening for us.

I'd be happy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you camping this summer, as you know how much Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 camping. When do you plan to actually do it? It would be great if we could workout a weekend, as Did you mean "I'd"?I'd
i'd
 have my mind away from work.

Your amazing friend,

Bryce