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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. L2lV

Dear John, I am glad to hear from you after long time. I hope you are in good condition. I am writing this letter to you suggesting, job is a better option than college. I have got the details of the college you wanted to pursue and the first thing I saw is the huge amount of admission fee. Moreover, the college has 2 years of diploma course which is long enough to complete and I would definitely not suggest you to waste your time that has no outcome in you favor. Since you have experience in the field of engineering, I'd suggest you to opt for job. Job is a better idea to go for because it is a source of income that will help you and your family financially. The main aim to do job is to earn experience that will help you to boost your career and will also open many doors in future. You can also purse part-time studies parallelly with the job that will help you to earn and gain knowledge at the same time. I would suggest you to go for Technician job because you have a relevant experience in that field. Moreover, Technician job has better opportunities in future compared to other jobs. I am hoping that this letter might help you to choose your path correctly. yours's Sincerely Sandra

Dear John,

I am glad to hear from you after long time. I hope you are in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 condition. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am writing this letter to you suggesting, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 is a better option than college.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of the college you wanted to pursue and the first
 thing I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 is the huge amount of admission fee. Moreover
, the college has 2 years of diploma course which is long This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to complete and I would definitely not suggest you to waste your time that has no outcome in you favor. Since you have experience in the field of engineering, I'd suggest you to opt for job.

Job is a better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to go for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is a source of income that will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 you and your family financially
. The main aim to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 is to earn experience that will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 you to boost your career and will also
 open This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 doors Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
. You can also
 purse part-time studies Possible spelling mistake found.parallelparallelsparalleled
parallelly
 with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 that will You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 you to earn and gain knowledge at the same time.

I would suggest you to go for Technician You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you have a relevant experience in that field. Moreover
, Technician You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 has better opportunities in future compared to other jobs.

I am hoping that this letter might You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadviceuseservicesupportcomforthand
help
 you to choose your path correctly
.

An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: "yours"?yours
yours'
s Sincerely


Sandra