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your friend sent you present for your birthday last week, write note thank to your friend

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I received presents from my friends on my birthday last week and I had a letter to thank my friend for sending a lot of presents. I think some gifts are so cool and suitable for me, especially "watches". After that, a friend sent some fruit to me, which kind of fruit was orange and I like it. For other presents I like too. I spent time fulfilling a day and I used cooking skills in various Laos foods to provide my family and friend with a taste. So, I was very happy on my birthday this year.
I received presents from my
friends
on my birthday last week and I had a letter to thank my
friend
for sending
a lot of
presents. I
think
some
gifts are
so
cool and suitable for me,
especially
"
watches
"
. After that, a
friend
sent
some
fruit to me, which kind of fruit was orange and I like it. For other presents I like too. I spent time fulfilling a day and I
used
cooking
skills
in various Laos foods to provide my family and
friend
with a taste.
So
, I was
very
happy on my birthday this year.
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IELTS letter your friend sent you present for your birthday last week, write note thank to your friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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