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Places to visit in my city

Places to visit in my city 2ROaM
Hi, Lora! I congratulate you on successfully passing the exam! These are really good news! Now I hope, you have an opportunity to visit Krasnodar, my hometown. Let me introduce this city and places that we soon visit. First of all, it has undergone signifficant changes over few ten years. The majority of old buildings were demolished and instead of them local authorities poured huge amount of money to errect apartment complexes, office blocks and shopping centreses. By now it is a far cry from what was few years ago. It is actually packed with fascinating and attractive spots such as cinemas, resturants and parks that cater all the tastes. Additionally, rules and orders are everywhere so you may feel comfortable and safe wherever we go. Nevertheless, there are particular drawbacks which we cannot ignore. Crowds of people with noise of cars and public transport create strong buzz that you cannot escape. On top of that exhaust fumes make you choking. Although you do not have to take care of it. We will plan our day to avoid cenral streets and loud locations. Well, I assume you wull come as soon as it possible. Do not hesitate, we will have a whale of time there!
Hi, Lora! I congratulate you on
successfully
passing the exam! These are
really
good
news!
Now
I hope, you have an opportunity to visit Krasnodar, my hometown.
Let
me introduce this city and places that we
soon
visit.

First of all
, it has undergone
signifficant
changes
over few ten years. The majority of
old
buildings
were demolished
and
instead
of them local authorities poured huge amount of money to
errect
apartment complexes, office blocks and shopping
centreses
. By
now
it is a far cry from what was few years ago. It is actually packed with fascinating and attractive spots such as cinemas,
resturants
and parks that cater all the tastes.
Additionally
,
rules
and orders are everywhere
so
you may feel comfortable and safe wherever we go.

Nevertheless
, there are particular drawbacks which we cannot
ignore
. Crowds of
people
with noise of cars and public transport create strong buzz that you cannot escape.
On top of that
exhaust fumes
make
you choking.
Although
you do not
have to
take care of it. We will plan our day to avoid
cenral
streets and loud locations.

Well, I assume you
wull
come
as
soon
as
it
possible. Do not hesitate, we will have a whale of time there!
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IELTS letter Places to visit in my city

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
205 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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