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You bought refrigerator, after two days it went wrong, complaint letter

You bought refrigerator, after two days it went wrong, complaint letter gW0G1

Dear Sir or Madam I am wfiting in the hope of that you can help me with a problem regarding refrigerator that I recently bought from your shop. After only three days, thing started to go wrong. On June 22 I visited one of your l9cal shops in order to buy a fridge for my sister. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a shop assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Three days later, sister called and said that item went wrong. When she used the fridge for the first day it worked properly and products were fresh. However, when she utilized it the second day seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working. The meat and milk products were spoiled. Furthermore, when she put butterin it, it also spoiled. In addition to this, the fridge did not fresh the right temperature. I would like you to replace the fridge with well functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise, unfortunately, I will be forced to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully, Maria Remark

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help
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bought
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only
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started
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wrong
. On June 22 I visited one of your l9cal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
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buy
 a fridge for my sister. Looking around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
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expected
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shop
 assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. Three days later, sister called and said that item went This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. When she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the fridge for the first
 day it worked properly
 and products were fresh. However
, when she utilized it the second day seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working. The meat and milk products were spoiled
. Furthermore
, when she put Possible spelling mistake found.butteringbutter in
butterin
 it, it also
 spoiled. In addition
 to this, the fridge did not fresh the right temperature. I would like you to replace the fridge with well functioning one. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive the same type of unit and brand. Otherwise
, unfortunately, I will be forced
 to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Yours faithfully
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