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Your friend is planning to visit your region with his family members and asks for your help to arrange the accommodation. You are supposed to write a letter to tell your friend The details of the accommodation you prepared. Suggestions of travelling belongings. Introductions of some sightseeing activities in your region

Your friend is planning to visit your region with his family members and asks for your help to arrange the accommodation. You are supposed to write a letter to tell your friend The details of the accommodation you prepared. Suggestions of travelling belongings. Introductions of some sightseeing activities in your region pjYL
Dear Susan, Thanks for your letter. I am so glad to know that you and your family will visit Auckland from December 12 to 17. Auckland is the largest city of New Zealand, and there are many high-quality restaurants here that serve food from all over the world. Generally, those with a score of 4. 5 or more in Google Maps are worth trying. I have booked a four star luxury hotel named SkyCity Hotel for you, which located in the centre of Auckland, and the breakfasts are included. As you may know, the UV rays in New Zealand are very strong and since New Zealand is in Summer when December, you must remember to bring sunscreen, hats and long-sleeved T-shirts. And of course, comfortable shoes are very important too. As for fun places, first, I will recommend casino, which is just beside your hotel. Auckland Zoo is also an interesting place. It is not far away from the city centre, and I am sure your children will like it. Then, do not miss the Christmas parade, which will be held on December 14. It is very special for you to enjoy a summer Christmas like this. I hope you have a great holiday. See you soon, Mia
Dear Susan,

Thanks for your letter. I am
so
glad to know that you and your family will visit Auckland from December 12 to 17.

Auckland is the largest city of New Zealand, and there are
many
high-quality restaurants here that serve food from all over the world.
Generally
, those with a score of 4. 5 or more in Google Maps are worth trying. I have booked a four star luxury hotel named
SkyCity
Hotel for you, which located in the
centre
of Auckland, and the breakfasts
are included
.

As you may know, the UV rays in New Zealand are
very
strong and since New Zealand is in Summer when December, you
must
remember to bring sunscreen, hats and long-sleeved T-shirts. And
of course
, comfortable shoes are
very
important
too.

As for fun places,
first
, I will recommend casino, which is
just
beside your hotel. Auckland Zoo is
also
an interesting place. It is not far away from the city
centre
, and I am sure your children will like it. Then, do not miss the Christmas parade, which will
be held
on December 14. It is
very
special for you to enjoy a summer Christmas like this.

I hope you have a great holiday.

See
you
soon
,

Mia
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IELTS letter Your friend is planning to visit your region with his family members and asks for your help to arrange the accommodation. You are supposed to write a letter to tell your friend The details of the accommodation you prepared. Suggestions of travelling belongings. Introductions of some sightseeing activities in your region

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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