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You invited your family to have a special celebrate dinner in a well-known restaurant, but you are unsatisfied with the meal. You are writing to make a complaint. In your letter, you have to say: What the situation is; What the problem is; What you want them to do.

You invited your family to have a special celebrate dinner in a well-known restaurant, but you are unsatisfied with the meal. You are writing to make a complaint. In your letter, you have to say: What the situation is; What the problem is; What you want them to do. mxg8
Dear Sir, I am writing this latter because I am unsatisfied with the meal. I was organized my child’s birthday dinner party in your Captown restaurant. I was organized dinner party on 29th January 2021. I already discussed with your manager that I need 50% Jain food & 50% regular food. And also specify that it is a children’s party so make sure that all food are testy but not so spicy. But I do not received meal service as per my order. You provided very less Jain food. So that my child’s friends are not get the enough food. And you provided very spicy food so that it also not suit to children. Because of this my family & children does not enjoy that dinner party. I want that you refund my money because you do not prepare meal as per my order. Put some responsible person at manager level. Hoping for your positive response. Yours faithfully, Disha Mirani
Dear Sir,

I am writing this latter
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because
I
am unsatisfied
with the meal. I
was organized
my child’s birthday dinner party in your
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Captown
restaurant.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was organized
dinner party on 29th January 2021.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
already discussed with your manager that I need 50% Jain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
& 50% regular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. And
also
specify that it is a children’s party
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so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
are testy
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but
not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
spicy.

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But
I do not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "receive"?
received
meal service as per my order. You provided
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very
less Jain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.
“So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
my child’s friends are not
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get
the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. And you provided
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
spicy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that it
also
not suit to children.
Because of this
my family & children does not enjoy that dinner party.

I
Did you mean "want you to"?
want that you
refund my money
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
you do not prepare meal as per my order. Put
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
responsible person at manager level.

Hoping for your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Disha
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Mirani

IELTS letter You invited your family to have a special celebrate dinner in a well-known restaurant, but you are unsatisfied with the meal. You are writing to make a complaint. In your letter, you have to say: What the situation is; What the problem is; What you want them to do.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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